Secondly, research becomes more comprehensive. For instance, I
do not have to buy lots of reading materials to complete my research.
Most of the needed information can be found if I have Internet
access.
Để tránh dùng personal pronouns thì có thể sửa thành:
Secondly, research becomes more comprehensive. For instance, it
is not necessary for students to buy reading materials to complete
their researches. With internet access, most of the needed
information can be found quite conveniently without any cost.
3. Không được viết tắt
It's -> It is
They're -> They are
don't -> do not
exam -> examination
4. Tránh dùng các từ Informal, thay bằng những từ
Formal
Ví dụ như:
big -> large (chỉ khi tả đồ thị/mức độ, tả đồ vật thì có thể dùng
big)
give someone a hand -> help, assist
a little bit -> slightly
a lot of/ lots of -> many/a large amount of (tùy danh từ đếm
được hay không đếm được – countable hay uncountable)
